Talk:Ayla/Information/@comment-118.208.15.144-20130530041932

Corrections: "Ha ha ha! Will you just be my little girl?" sounds more like "Ha ha ha! Were you just beaten by a little girl?"

"I'm a buttercup, sweet as can be! Will you buy some major destruction from me?" sounds more like "I'm a buttercup, sweet as can be! Please would you buy some destruction for me?"

and finally, "Let's do a no killer run. Hehe, just kidding!" sounds more like "Let's do a no-kill run! Hehe, just kidding!"